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[valleymonster]

Song Title:	same enemy 23.2.08
Artist:	valleymonster
Album:	n/a
License:	Attribution Non-commercial No Derivatives
Extra Information:	needs alot of work i know, it's way from finished.....but i really need some feedback in order for me to improve my technique. please let me know what you guys think and how i can progress. many thanks Adz
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[joevirus]

I think its sounds good i like the noises u have used, altho some of the samples need cuting of or delay the start theres some clicks comming from these sounds?? But as for the tune its self i like it .
all u need to do is eq ur sounds a little tighter m8

peace jv

[valleymonster]

really appreciate your words and time in commenting. thank you.
i shall try and sort this out, but its not finished yet and is just an idea. hopefuly i can make something of it.
all the best
adz

[canton]

Nice one! Drum patterns are a bit like lbunshi's

http://sampleswap.org/artist/lbunshi

I like the freakiness in this.

So far as advice... mostly just mixing ideas. Everything feels pretty center-mixed to me. Maybe try panning some of those sounds, or moving them around.

[valleymonster]

ey up canton.

just like to say cheers for taking the time to feed back on this. really helpfull comments to which i completly agree. i will take them fully onboard .thanks again.

A

[indigochild]

The piano riff sounds a bit like the theme from donny darko remixed.

[rtonini]

I LIKE IT! THOSE DRUMS ARE HOT!

[JunglistMilitia]

badman drum beat!!!! wish my tunes sounded tht gd