Joined: 13 May 2003 Posts: 589 City / Country: Santa Fe, NM
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:29 pm Post subject:
The kick that drops in at 0:32 is too big, I think -- takes over the mix. Would be nice to have a mellower, or sharper, smaller kick there -- esp. since there's a nice deep kick that comes in with the 16th hats just a little while later.
The synth in at 1:04 is a great idea! I like the syncopation. I think the sound is a little weak -- could be more agressive/interesting.
*such pretty* melodies in at 2:42. Thank you :)
Around 4:10 there's a lot of bass end stuff that starts stepping on its own toes -- needs to be cleaned up down there so the subbass can be better defined.
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