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robopenguin

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robopenguin

Joined: 25 Jan 2006 Posts: 4 City / Country: NYC
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 2:58 pm Post subject: Thanks for listening |
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| Thanks for listening. Please leave a bit of feedback. All comments are welcome. |
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JamesGriff
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:43 pm Post subject: sweet |
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| i was dancing to this while reading nietzsche. good combination. |
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SF

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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 4:14 pm Post subject: |
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| without music life would be a mistake - Nietzshe |
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robopenguin

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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:25 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, Nietzche and music have a long and involved history. He seemed to be partial to Wagnerian opera, but i like to think that if he lived now, he would be into electronica.
The next one will be named Eternal Recurrence ;) |
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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Totally a promising piece. Very musical.
I think a good start for tightening it up would be some mixing/balancing.
The 16-th note bassline often gets lost in the mix. Could be made louder, or some other tricks to get it to stand out. It's a nice bassline, and its movement helps to carry the melody, so I think it could get pushed almost as far forward as the kick drum itself. There's also an opportunity to sculpt yourself a really original bass sound there.
Also the synthline that comes in at 3:24 goes non-stop until the finale -- might be nice to let it drop out at least once. |
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