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DAB
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| canton
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 7:31 am Post subject: |
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Really, really nice.
Great bassline and piano lines. Did you write those / record those, or are they from loops?
All kinds of pretty in this one. Stereo imaging is fantastic. I can really hear the Logic Audio shimmer & quality coming through this -- reason I've been using it to produce myself since version 4 (1995!) |
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| canton
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 7:34 am Post subject: |
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You know after fully listening, I do have one comment:
I think it would be brilliant to have a section in the middle or near the end where the whole melodic content, the key, etc. changes. Basically, in old songwriting terms, a chorus or a bridge. It's such a melodic piece that I do get tired of the same chord progression and bassline throughout. It would be massively refreshing to have it change up and suddenly have the bassline in a different key, maybe slightly different chord progression... and then when we come back, that original groove will feel fresh and great all over again.
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DAB
Joined: 05 Feb 2007 Posts: 6 City / Country: Annecy / France
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 7:38 am Post subject: |
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Thank you very much, Canton!
This tune is only made with loops, except the scratch at the start of the drum line.
I'm just a beginner, so I use 5 or 10% of the power of Logic Studio. It's really funny!
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DAB
Joined: 05 Feb 2007 Posts: 6 City / Country: Annecy / France
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 7:45 am Post subject: |
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Yes, I really agree with you, Canton. Loops are too repetitive. I'd like to make a tune more like Amalgamation Of Soundz "Phuture Soundz", one of my models, but it takes time... I keep workin' on!
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